A charming story with sympathetic characters, and great dialogue, but it felt really rushed. Now I'm not one of those people who automatically discounts a story for being short, because some stories really do work best at a shorter length, but this didn't quite work for me at the length it was at.
However, it's a nice way to spend an afternoon, and competently written. I just wish there was a bit more room for it to breathe, and a little bit more conflict to contend with. As it was, it was basically a story of waiting for Paul to get out of his own ass. LOL.